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Is education important to one's life? Why or why not?

작성자 : sam***   ·   2015-08-28

I think education is a basic element of development or improvement of life like a foundation stone.

We can learn and know a fact of something from education and then use the knowledage for live, think about changes in differnt way.

A new invention comes from basic knowledage what benefit of education. All technology things, science, art, literature even society, every part of our life is improved compare than before through education.

It could lead not only new development of physical things but also change or improve invisible things like human behavior.

Let's think an example. Smoking. People didn't aware of negative part of smoking before education that how much it is bad for one's lung, cause of many health problem, passive smoking is also bad if a person do not smoke oneself.

Educated people could understand and say no. It drives changes like non-smoking campaign for improve general thought of smoking environment and change people's behavior.

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I think education is a basic element of development or improvement in life like a foundation stone. W
e can learn and know facts about something through education and then use the knowledge to live and think about the changes in a different way. A new invention comes from basic knowledge as a benefit of education. Technology, science, art, literature even society, every part of our life is improved compared to before through education. It could lead not only to new developments of physical things but also change or improve invisible things like human behavior. Let's think of an example. Smoking. People weren't aware of the negative sides of smoking before education, like how bad it is for one's lung, how it causes many health problems, passive smoking is also bad if a person does not smoke but experiences secondhand smoke. Educated people could understand and say no. It drives changes like non-smoking campaigns to improve the general thought of smoking in an environment and changes people's behavior.

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