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my home work
작성자 : k11*** · 2015-09-04
1:Get my dictionary ready,
2:Take wash my face.
3.Comb my hair.
4:tie my hair
5:Getmy school uniform.
6:Put my PE kits in my PE bag.
7:wake up ealry.
8:Hug with my.
9.Call to my dad.
10:Eat my vitamin.
11:brush my teeth.
12:check my bag again.
13:tie my neaktie.
14:Get ready my waterbottle.
15:Saygood bye to my mom.
2:Take wash my face.
3.Comb my hair.
4:tie my hair
5:Getmy school uniform.
6:Put my PE kits in my PE bag.
7:wake up ealry.
8:Hug with my.
9.Call to my dad.
10:Eat my vitamin.
11:brush my teeth.
12:check my bag again.
13:tie my neaktie.
14:Get ready my waterbottle.
15:Saygood bye to my mom.
답변
CORRECTION/S:
2. Wash my face.
3. Comb my hair.
4. Tie my hair
5. Get my school uniform.
6. Put my PE kit in my PE bag.
7. Wake up early.
8. Hug my (?).
9. Call my dad.
10. Take my vitamin.
11. Brush my teeth.
12. Check my bag again.
13. Tie my necktie.
14. Prepare my water bottle.
15. Say goodbye to my mom.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Spelling
* Choice of words
* Proper use of punctuation marks
* Proper spacing