토크펀- 15년 노하우 토크펀과 함께 영어를 쉽고 재미있게!

학습방

Mom,dad
Hi~~mom and dad!I`m Doi
Thank you!
I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Happy Thusday^^~~~~

CORRECTION/S:

Mom and dad.
Hi, mom and dad! ~~I'm~~ This is Doi.
Thank you!
I love you!!!~~!!!!!!!!!!~~
Happy Thursday^^~

Hello Ruby! :) I think this is short, but very sweet. I hope you could write this in a paper and you could give it to them. :)

POINTS TO IMPROVE ON: Sentence construction, spelling and punctuation.

-Teacher Cherish