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H.W 6.13

작성자 : eli***   ·   2017-06-13

My grandmother likes sweet.
Because if we're order we are be grandma,and our body don't have sweets.
So my grandmother likes sweets very much.

답변

My grandmother likes sweet. ✓
Because as we gets older like grandma our body won't have sweets anymore.
So, my grandmother likes sweets very much. ✓


2nd sentence:
Because, as we gets older like grandma our body won't have sweets anymore.
correction: As we get older like a grandma our body won't have sugar anymore.


#1 There is a circumstance in which we can start a sentence with ?because? and not be violating any silly rules. If we start a clause with ?because?, then insert a comma, and then a second clause, then both of the clauses are in the same sentence and everyone is safe.


#2 As we get - subject verb agreement (Plural subject + no s verb)


#3 Let's use the appropriate words for making our sentences. example: sugar - sweet

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