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작성자 : kms*** · 2017-08-29
Title : If I am a time travler
If I am a time traveler I go in 2035.
Then I am 31 years old.
I want to see my future.
If I am a famous computer programmar
Then I am very happy.
But If I don't work this time.
I am very sad.
Then I study very hard.
Next, I dream my job.
If I am a time traveler I go in 2035.
Then I am 31 years old.
I want to see my future.
If I am a famous computer programmar
Then I am very happy.
But If I don't work this time.
I am very sad.
Then I study very hard.
Next, I dream my job.
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CORRECTION/S:
Title: If I am a Time Traveler
If I am a time traveler, I would go to the year of 2035. Then I am 31 years old. I want to see my future. If I would become a famous computer programmer. Then, I am very happy but If I don't work this time.
I am very sad. Then I study very hard. Next, I will follow my dream job.
Title: If I am a Time Traveler
If I am a time traveler, I would go to the year of 2035. Then I am 31 years old. I want to see my future. If I would become a famous computer programmer. Then, I am very happy but If I don't work this time.
I am very sad. Then I study very hard. Next, I will follow my dream job.
BE MINDFUL of verb tenses and spelling.